你知道思維導(dǎo)圖也可以應(yīng)用在英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作中嗎？快來(lái)跟小編一起學(xué)習(xí)一下吧！
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一
寫(xiě)作時(shí)需考慮哪些方面的因素？
（1）本話題所需要的詞塊、語(yǔ)塊。
（2）本話題的寫(xiě)作模板結(jié)構(gòu)等。
（3）本話題所涉及到的經(jīng)典名句、諺語(yǔ)等。
二
困惑與對(duì)策
困惑1：寫(xiě)什么？
以《How to learn well?》為題，寫(xiě)一篇作文，那么我們應(yīng)該如何入手開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作呢？來(lái)看看以下幾張思維導(dǎo)圖，能夠幫你整理好一篇作文的寫(xiě)作框架。
困惑2：如何選材？
即使知道了寫(xiě)作框架，但在補(bǔ)充框架時(shí)又會(huì)遇到另一個(gè)困惑：如何選材？以下是一些關(guān)于寫(xiě)作選材的建議：
1．選定英語(yǔ)思維導(dǎo)圖各區(qū)域所需的詞塊和語(yǔ)塊。
2．將各區(qū)域的詞塊和語(yǔ)塊按段落寫(xiě)成連貫的語(yǔ)篇。
3．對(duì)照思維導(dǎo)圖自我批改，注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用。
困惑3：如何表達(dá)？
很多學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，使用的句式比較單一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏個(gè)性。 針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題，我們可以從以下幾個(gè)方面改進(jìn)：
1．對(duì)相同意思，注意不同句式的表達(dá)法，選擇更好的句式。
2．短文寫(xiě)作，表達(dá)力求精悍、生動(dòng)、豐富，避免重復(fù)用一樣的句式。
3．特別注意使用承上啟下的詞語(yǔ)和句子。
三san
思維導(dǎo)圖在英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用實(shí)例
寫(xiě)作流程
1. 審題、理清思路：考慮寫(xiě)什么（挑選關(guān)鍵詞，搭建作文框架）。
2. 選擇詞語(yǔ)：根據(jù)話題和作文框架選用所需要的語(yǔ)料（詞塊和語(yǔ)塊）。
3. 遣詞造句：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖中的語(yǔ)料，用合適的句型寫(xiě)作。
4. 語(yǔ)篇定稿：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖修改潤(rùn)色作文——緊扣主題、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，關(guān)聯(lián)自然，語(yǔ)篇流暢。
四
寫(xiě)作實(shí)例
實(shí)例1：【2012天津】
假如你有兩位同學(xué)——芳芳和明明，參加了上星期二學(xué)校組織的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，他們的不同表現(xiàn)使你深有感觸。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表各中的內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
芳芳 | 明明 | 我 |
1.認(rèn)為自己英語(yǔ)好，不需要努力；花費(fèi)時(shí)間挑選比賽用的漂亮衣服 2.因準(zhǔn)備不足，太緊張，而沒(méi)有完成演講。 | 1.努力學(xué)習(xí)，向別人請(qǐng)教；賽前兩天腿受傷，但不放棄 2.在比賽中表現(xiàn)良好 | 應(yīng)該向明明學(xué)習(xí) |
參考詞匯：英語(yǔ)演講比賽 English Speech Contest
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)
2. 短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.
范文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn"t do well in the contest because she hadn"t got ready for the contest.
But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.
No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn from Mingming.
范文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn"t need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.
In the end, Fangfang didn"t get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.
In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
范文3
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it wasn"t necessary to spend lots of time preparing for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes should wear, which make herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contestbecause she didn"t get ready very well.
Instead, Mingming had been working at English and asking others for help. What"s more, he had hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he had never given up. As the result, he won the contest.
I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.
實(shí)例2:【2012吉林】
生活是豐富多彩的，沒(méi)有愛(ài)好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，在生活中，你有什么興趣愛(ài)好嗎？這個(gè)興趣愛(ài)好是怎樣培養(yǎng)起來(lái)的？它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩？請(qǐng)你以 “My Hobby”為題，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)一篇短文。（詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右）
要求：
1.語(yǔ)句通順，合乎邏輯，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
范文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
范文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.
轉(zhuǎn)自 | 初中英語(yǔ)知識(shí)
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